The most important person in my life is my mother. My mother is a woman who has given birth of me to this world. For me, she is the best woman in this world because she has been keeping and caring me up till now. My mother always remainds me when I made a mistake. She is very patient and never angry. In addition, she keeps and takes care of me when I was sick. Besides, she always supports me when I slumped. Although she was tired, she always does all the housework. She is the first teacher for me, she taught me everything that I never know before. I often wish I can be like her, a good mother and wife. She is my mother, the most important person in my life.
What a touchy paragraph! Yep, a mum is the most wonderful woman on earth, and it's not easy to be a great mum and wife:-)
BalasHapusHesti, I think u hev to make ur supporting sentences more organized, then u use more varied transition signals to produce well-written paragraph. Be aware of the little things such as spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Nice topic anyway:-)